what's up yo? okay so a lot of people have been writing poems lately so i'm writing one now. poetry is one of my hobbies anyway. here it goes....
do you know what it feels like to be alone?
when the world seems to turn its back on you and you have no where to go
the darkness envelopes you, no where to turn, no one to go to
you can only wait in the dead silence
hoping, pleading for a second chance
but when we get the second chance what do we do with it?
is it a trap or for real?
life doesn't give out many second chances
the past is set in stone, the future holds a mystery
don't be afraid to stand out, stand up for what you believe in
we only have so long, we only have one life
be remembered, leave a footprint
make people notice
are you here for the ride....or are you in the driver's seat?
4 comments:
dat be teh v3ry gewd j0b
Aubrea that was awesome! Also, I forgot to tell you thanks for the Candy Cane Gram, what you wrote was so nice! It made me smile :) See; smile. haha
See you after break!
P.S. check out my blog sometime crazyhyperblog.blogspot.com
Zach
aubrea wilson!...........wuz up........
Aubrea,
Excellent poem! I love that you're writing this stuff on your own, especially over the break! I've been trying to write a lot of poetry these past few weeks, but I'm never quite happy enough with it to share. A writer's slump, I guess. But it makes me all the more impressed when I see someone finish a poem, proud enough to show it to the world. Nice work.
peace and love,
e
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